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[Notepad Drawing Collab 2009]

LegoLass

Real potential, but why so perverted? I mean, is his mech drawin supposed to be a mech, or a human stripper/ whore?

JKAmovies responds:

lol. LegolaSS sure has a hell of a lot of potential in his artwork, but I guess that's his style of art. . . :P

[Endless Void scroller]

Pretty good...

But sometimes I wonder if I am actually damaging them. Perhaps an impact animation would do nicely.

ameeyo responds:

It has a sort of 'impact animation'
The crafts get darker when you hit them.... but anyway.. I might change the animation if it is hard to spot.

[Eggs Game]

Well...

The music loop definitely was a big downside, but I have trouble with that all the time. And also, dont mind Eloquentlunatic42, he's a sarcastic jerk. For effort, I'm gonna have to give you.... A 0...
NO JKING I GIVE U 9! It was a great effort. Coding and animation better than I could ever have done.

JustHannah responds:

well thank you very much.
i dont really take any notice of peoples stupid sarcastic remarks. they dont bother me in the slightest
thank you for the score

[Epic Battle Fantasy]

lol, you can push around the girls boobz XD

Good job, and I liked the, err, "hidden" activity, but the medals dont work.

matt-likes-swords responds:

They work for me..

[The Enrichment Center]

I like it,

It was a good game and personally liked it. That doesnt mean I liked it more than Portal: Flash version, tho, but I liked it all the same.

BUT

The two endings were kinda obvious. You either die of neurotoxins or you escape. Also, I had a hard time following along. You seemed to repeat things but with different words, and they werent describing words. For instance, Something entertaining, but yet simple. "But" and "Yet" mean the same thing the way you used them, and like I said, werent describing anything.

FINALLY

I think a good thing for you guys is to do the following:
1. See if the makers of Portal: The Flash version will edit the game with you guys.
2. Fix those grammar problems.

PS: Someone already made an ACTUAL 3-D GAME MOD for Portal 0.5 and is just going through contracting, then it will be its own seperate game. It has its own video. This is basically before GLaDOS flooded the place with neurotoxins the first time. The mod isnt out for download until he finds out if Valve will take it (if they say no it will be a mod). However there is a YouTube video for it (cant remember name tho my friend showed it to me awhile ago).

PSS: 2500th vote =D

RAWowner333 responds:

We knew we couldn't come close to the Portal: Flash version, but we wanted to try to make a game somewhat portal related. and thank you

I'm well aware that my grammar sucks, majorly. lol. my apologies

If they would be willing to help, that'd be so fucking awesome. but I don't really want to bother them with this game.

thank you for the review

[Sirtom93 - The Game!]

This isnt funny

I frown apon this dude. And it has nothing to do with this game and its quality. Youre making fun of a really sad story. Sirtom93 apparently needed help and he wasnt able to get it. His parents probably didnt care about him. That can be proved by him wanting to shoot up his school and they would actually let him BRING the gun in the first place! Now he can get the attention and help he needs. Besides, he is probably embarassed as hell. People are probably afraid of him now which means now he wont even be able to live a normal life. If you did do something like this, you shouldve made it the same but change him with Piconjo and that one NG guy who saved the school could be changed into Pico. Now not only his local area knows about it but most of the NG world does too! Now thanks to Tom Fulp completely broadcasting it, assholes like you are too! Give the guy a break. He's gonna have enough trouble in life from now on and thanks to this he probably wont be able to show his face on Newgrounds either! And anyone who thinks this is good is an asshole just like this guy! Thanks to him, 4,402 more people know about this!

JaY11 responds:

He tried to burn his school, potentially putting innocent lives a risk

I HOPE I DIDN'T EMBARRASS HIM

[Doodle Tetris]

Like the person before u: WTF are u saying?

I cant understand anything u say, especially the comments. I read it over and over for 5 minutes and still couldnt figure it out! Like the submission just before this one, go back 2 2nd grade

BigJimmy08 responds:

like i said before am sorry my keyboard is a bit broken as some of the keys don't al ways work when u press them down but if u look agian i noticed this my self and tried to correct the keyboards mistakes but ps thanks for not being so rude like the other above you who gave me 0 for my spelling even tho there surpose to be commenting on my flash

[Tie Fighter Assault]

Heres a bug: The Graphics

Now, I'm not one to say that graphics are everything. And quite honestly, I dont even complain about the NES's graphics but real-e! If your not going to have good graphics, give it amazing processing power (since your not developing a console, you cant help this part)/ a new and intriguing revolutionary way to play such as the Wii and the DS, instead of the boring old WASD and Mouse configuration. And with a comp, you CAN do this. One example is a game on addicting games awhile back that was a flash version of GH3. You could play "Rocker" style, in which you could hold the keyboard like a guitar. And, there r plenty of webcam games on this site. Oh, and I gave u a 4/5 and ment to give u a 1, so u get a zero from me here

teejay-number13 responds:

Yeah, this wasn't meant to be the game to end all games. And about the graphics, they turned out better then I hoped considering I can't draw to save my life. It was merely a simple game for me to learn some of the ins and outs of flash.

[Hanna in a Choppa]

"Coppa in the choppa"

Pros
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1. You get good reviews
2. 2 rewards
3. Achievements are in the game, forcing the player to play again and again to finish, which means more reviews.
4. Tutorial is throughout the entire game, which means no boring old tutorial that you have to do before you can play. In this sense its close to Portal Flash Version
5. Quite a fun loop
6. It doesnt explode everytime you hit the wall. You get a few tries first.
7. Levels are sometimes skippable
8. Very basic and easy to follow instructions
9. Clever name

Cons
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1. In my opinion, Coppa in the Choppa sounds better, but thats my opinion, so this con wont count towards the final score.
2. In the first magnet level, it is nearly impossible to get the magnet.
3. The winch is really difficult sometimes.

pros= 9
cons= -2
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7 stars

CMU responds:

If I'd called it Coppa in a Choppa, that'd ruin one of my plans for a sequel, Hanna Flees the Coppas.

You can just tap the magnet off the roof with the choppa's body. Dead easy! You can flick the winch onto it too, although that's quite a bit harder.